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Peacefull... but what?????

It's very nice... but what the hell did you do with the end?? At least give it a desent ending!! It just stops at 3.42 and then does something very weird... This song definetly has some potential! But just work it out a little bit better... It has a wonderfull flow!! The instruments you use are of very high quality and sound really nice!!
Cheerio

Charleon responds:

Now that you point it out, it's very strange o.O; maybe I left an animation clip laying around somewhere, the song is meant to loop perfectly

Nice!

A very nice song, although I don't feel it's that special. I don't really know how to explane it... The story you wrote kept me a bit distracted from the music, and the combination is very good, but as a standalone song... I don't know it's a really good background song. Like seen in a movie. I could vision your story right away, but when I'm only listening to the music I miss somewhat depth. (hope i didn't make you angry!) Oke well with that been said... It's awesome ;-)
Cheerio!

Xyirx responds:

As I listen more of it, I think I should have put some more bass sounds (like double bass and tuba) to create richness within some parts of the song. :) Plus, I'm considering remastering this song several times now. I'm studying how to mix and master the track, actually.

My first intention for Draconity album (this track is one of them) is to let each track "tells" stories inside listeners' mind....It's not really an ambient track which plays as a background for a film but something that portrays a picture....so it's a complete set of music in the piece.

I really appreciate you for writing a detailed review, and no, you didn't make me upset at all; in fact I feel really honored to get some suggestions and honest compliments. Thank you very much.

Xyirx

what if

What if you just kept it with one tonesort?? Not pick all 12 at the same time?
it kinda sucks...

psycokiller333 responds:

um yeah i made the appear 5 seconds after you dumbass

yeah

Ahhh, I see the work of an 0 bomber! It's not entirely my kind of music, but I really like the flow! Nice sounds and the synths your picked are just great! Very nice and interesting tune! A 5 to help even out the score!!
Cheerio!

RAVEN responds:

Yeah it's pretty unfortunate how people who submit a song find one that they may see a threat in terms of competition so they just try to get rid of it. Thanks for the review and the vote ChrisisD, I really appreciate the feedback. Take it easy man. =)

Hey there!

And yet again very nice! I've got only one comment: i don't really like your piano sound... (don't hate me for it ;-)) I use Propellorheads Real Piano's, I just love the sound of it... maybe you could give it a try? (you do need Reason 4 though...)
The music is just awesome! very good!
Cheerio

SolusLunes responds:

I actually use Reason Pianos...

I might look this up.

mwoah

Your songs are pretty good... but they are too long and not interesting enough. it needs another instrument or lyrics. with lyrics its probably really good, but now its too simple and empty... nice catchy tune though!
Cheerio!

Demoncaterpie responds:

Yeah, again this is just me on acoustic. Once I get the band version recorded I'll post it. Our keyboardist already has a nice backing riff for the song!

nice!!

The beginning makes me think i'm deaf at my left ear :P The drum sounds suck pretty hard, the crash is just awfull. I wouldn't call it techno though, maybe alternative or something like that. It has a nice flow and the sound is good.
I feel its too long, what you did in about 8 minutes could've been done in 4, maybe 5 minutes. Its too long with too little interesting changes. The beginning though is really cool, it makes me feel funny :P
Cheerio!!

codbarley responds:

meh..... construcive critisism......

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Nice melodies, but it sounds way to mechanical for me... The strings are nice. I also think the piano sound has to much echo... So my opinion is: play the piano with more 'feeling' and change the sound. Hope you can work with it!!
Cheerio!

cRAVE01 responds:

I'll try and see what I can do with the tempo ^_^ It's all arranged in FL, no finger work here other than clicking the mouse pad. But I don't doubt for two half seconds that adjusting the tempo throughout the song would give it a more soulful feel, esp in the beginning.

Thanks for the review m8!

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