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Yeah, this is beginning something. Although in my opinion it remains a beginning, it doesn't really go anywhere. I really like the chords and synth introduced at 0:51. The mixing is really nice and every sound has a clear part in the song. My biggest complaint is it that there's missing a real melody to bind the song together. It sounds like 3 separate parts, the intro/outro, the chord-progression and then the part starting 1:42. Nothing really binding those three parts together imo.
So, like your title suggested, it feels like the beginning of a song. It has a lot of potential. Now go and finish it ;)

Hit The Road Jack. Basically, though. Not really my cup of tea. In my opinion it would've been so much better if you actually played the piano instead of midi-ed it. Besides that, there's literally no swing in this entire song...

KayozKun responds:

Fair enough man. Thanks for the review!

Well the chords are basically Creep from Radiohead. Doesn't make it bad, at all. Your voice is quite soothing. But a bridge, breaking from the rest, would've been nice. And as said before, the mixing is pretty awesome. Lovely overal.
Cheers.

ConnorHeather responds:

The chords are a I, VI, IV, IVm and then Creep is I, III-major, IV, IVm.
The 4th to minor 4th is where you are feeling the creep vibes.
Agreed a bridge would be nice, but i wasn't given any lyrics for a bridge.
Lyrics i was given were "Verse - Chorus - Chorus" so i used a guitar solo as kind of "bridge"
Thank you for your feedback it is much appreciated!
Hope you are having a great week!

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